Post by indigodragon on Dec 1, 2010 17:47:42 GMT -7
Here's part my first fanfic for the "Teddy Ruxpin" business, this prequels my TMNT/MLP fanfiction series, it's also a rewrite of another fanfic of mine from years ago. Before the Ponies met the TMNT, they met Teddy Ruxpin and his friends. This is my crack at how I think Tweeg would turn over a new leaf.
Critique and/or feedback would be really appreciated. Enjoy!
Part 1:
Today is a typical day for the Little Ponies as they romp and frolic in Dream Valley. Wind Whistler and Paradise fly through clouds and even bashing some. As Fizzy makes bubbles appear and Speedy pops them one by one. Scrumptious gets some vegetables from her garden as Posey picks a few flowers from hers.
Posey: Gee Scrumptious, your vegetables look great.
Scrumptious: So do your flowers, Posey. (sniffs flowers) They smell pretty too.
Scrumptious takes her basket of vegetables to Cupcake’s kitchen. While Paradise is flying, she notices a giant airship. She meets the crew. One is a brown bear wearing red & tan shirt & shorts, the other is a yellow caterpillar with eight limbs and the third is an old man wearing a green shirt and inventor’s apron.
Paradise: Who are you?
Bear: I was going to ask the same to you, also where are we?
Paradise: I’m Paradise and this is Dream Valley in Ponyland.
Old man: Ponyland? That doesn’t seem to be on our charter.
Caterpillar: We probably should’ve taken a right at Alba Query.
Bear: Well, I’m Teddy Ruxpin, an illiop. And this is Grubby, an octopede.
Grubby: Hello.
Teddy: And Newton Gimmick.
Gimmick: How do you do.
Teddy: We could use a place to rest anyway. Know where we can stay, Paradise?
Paradise: Sure do. Follow me.
The airship follows Paradise to Dream Valley. At that time, in a tower far from Ponyland, a green character wearing a purple robe is at his desk, looking over papers and such. His name being Jack W. Tweeg.
Tweeg: (Sighs) Ever since L.B., Buffy and the bounders left, it’s been rather dull around here. Also since those goody-two-shoes have left, there’s no one to bother.
He goes to his balcony, looking over it and remembering many of the times he’s tried villainy, only for it to turn out unpleasant.
Tweeg: I hate to admit it, but L.B.’s right; I am a failure as a villain. Also, do I really belong at M.A.V.O.? I mean, all that’s happened was I screwed up and got the slammer. No one at M.A.V.O. really cared for me, not even Mommy. Like L.B. said, I should quit.
Just then, Louie the messenger Grunge shows up with a telegram from M.A.V.O. He hands it to Tweeg whom opens it and reads it.
Tweeg: “To Jack W. Tweeg, we at M.A.V.O. have decided to give you a little something, to receive it, come to M.A.V.O. headquarters. Sign Quellor the Supreme Oppressor of Monsters And Villains Organization.” Hmm, I wonder what it could be.
He heads off to the headquarters of M.A.V.O. (Monsters and Villains Organization) where he comes before all the members and the head, Quellor. By him are his pet rat-bats, Ickly Bognostroclum, Drudge, Trudge and Sludge.
Quellor: So, Tweeg, you have come at last.
Tweeg: Yes. I got a telegram saying that you had something for me.
Bognostroclum: We’ve taken a vote and we’ve decided… you’re out of M.A.V.O.!
Tweeg (pretending to be upset when is really pleased): I… I am?
Quellor: Yes, you’ve done more screw-ups and less success and were lousy with dues.
Tweeg: I thought I paid my last due.
Mrs. Maggotheart: Yes, though you were tardy in showing up here.
Eleanor: You’ve been worthless since the day you were born!
Quellor: You Jack W. Tweeg have been nothing but a low-down idiotic nuisance to all of us ever since we let you in as an apprentice!
After being insulted, Tweeg becomes angry and bursts into song.
Tweeg:
That’s it!
I’ve had it
I hate to be dramatic
But it’s time for me
To hit the road
Quellor tries zapping him but Tweeg dodges just barely.
Terrific!
Fine!
I’m drawin’ the line
before I wind up as a great big toad!
Drudge, Sludge and Trudge take him by his arms and escort him out the door.
I was a fool to stop you from runnin’ the show
I’m cuttin’ ya loose, fellas!
Well, here I go!
He gets booted out the door, literally. He just waves back to them as they close the door at him.
Arrividerci!
C’est la vie!
Gets back up, rubbing his sore butt.
Hope all goes well!
I’m lookin’ out for me!
He returns to his tower as he packs his things and leaves a “For Sale” sign in front.
Tweeg speaking: Well, I’m off to start a new life. Maybe I’ll move back in with Pop.
He walks down a path into a small town.
Tweeg: But who knows what’ll happen? Only the future can tell.
He turns to some Illiper passing by.
Tweeg: Oh, you don’t think I can do it? I’ll show ya.
The passerby just rolls his eyes as Tweeg gets back into song.
Okay! I’m not bright,
I’ve paid my second-to-right,
And I don’t get no respect
I turn the other way
But this lousy day
Is the only thanks that I get
He comes upon a produce stand, leaning on the counter.
I never found a friend that I can trust
they promise caviar,
And leave me eatin’ dust!
He goes off again walking down the road.
That’s some reward for loyalty
From here on in,
I’m lookin’ out for me!
Oh, I don’t need nobody else
I’ll never fail
I’ll cover my own trail
He makes his way past a crowd of Illipers.
I can take care of myself!
He gets past them and comes upon some others, whom he puts his arms around; they all do a cancan of some sort.
You know, it just don’t pay
To give a hoot
I’m givin’ all my heart
What do I get?
the boot!
He breaks from the dancers and kicks the ground.
I’m through with that,
I’m runnin’ free
From here on in,
I’m lookin’ out for me!
(Song ends)
Someone hands him his suitcase that he put down somewhere, he takes it and continues on his way. At that time, Paradise introduces Teddy, Grubby and Gimmick to the rest of the Ponies and their friends.
Paradise: Everyone, meet Teddy, Grubby and Gimmick.
Wind Whistler: It’s a pleasure to make all of your acquaintances.
Gimmick: Likewise, I’m er, uh, sure.
Soon enough, everyone has tea, milk and gingerbread cookies.
Megan: So, what brings you to Ponyland?
Teddy: We’re looking for other Illiops like me in Grundo; also return some crystals to the Hard-to-Find City.
Paradise: I’ve heard of the Hard-to-Find City. It was taken over by the nasty Gutangs.
Grubby: Yup. We defeated them more than once. Though, we probably haven’t seen the last of Quellor.
Danny: Who’s this Quellor guy?
Teddy: He’s a powerful villain and the head of a group called Monsters and Villains Organization, or M.A.V.O.
Gimmick: But Grubby is right. Who knows what he’s up to now?
As Tweeg is walking down the path, he sits on a rock and takes a break. That’s when he’s approached by Quellor’s 3 goons.
Tweeg: Ugh, what is it this time?
Sludge: Quellor changed his mind about ya, he wants ya back in M.A.V.O.
Tweeg: Oh really?
Drudge: Yeah, if you complete a certain task, he’ll let you back in.
Tweeg: What sort of task?
Trudge: He’ll tell ya when we get back to H.Q.
Though, reluctant and skeptic, Tweeg follows them. They come to M.A.V.O. where Quellor is in front of a large cauldron.
Tweeg: So, what is it I need to do?
Quellor: Before I tell you that, first, let me tell you about the Solar Eclipse Monsters. You see, every solar eclipse, three giant creatures come from the base of Mt. Chaos and wreak havoc.
Tweeg: But the next solar eclipse won’t happen for another 3 months.
Quellor: I know, that’s where you come in. See, I came upon a spell that’ll make the eclipse last forever and the monsters will be under our control. If you conjure up the potion, you’re back in M.A.V.O.
Tweeg: Well, O.K.
He reluctantly and naively starts mixing the potion to create the eternal eclipse. Soon enough after he stirs the potion, it erupts and a dark purple cloud comes out.
Quellor: Yes. Yes!
Tweeg: So… I’m back in? (grins)
Quellor: Oh, you’re back in all right.
Trudge and Sludge throw him in a dungeon cell.
Tweeg: Oof!
And slam the door, locking it.
Quellor: Back in the dungeon that is. (laughs)
Tweeg: Hey! You tricked me, Quellor!
Trudge: Yeah, and to make sure you don’t foil M.A.V.O. again… (makes slashing sound)
Tweeg: (Gasps)
Quellor: But I’ll take care of that later. Right now, I have an eternal eclipse to prepare for.
He and his goons leave as Tweeg just sits there with his arms resting on his knees and buries his face in his arms.
Tweeg: (Sobbing)
Now Tweeg was in a great predicament, he helped let loose terrible monsters and he is to be killed. At that time, in Dream Valley, the Ponies and their friends are giving their guests a tour. They come upon Dream Castle where Majesty the unicorn and the Grundle King meet them.
Magic Star: And this is Dream Castle, where we used to live until we got Paradise Estate. Then we gave Dream Castle to the Grundles.
Majesty: I’m Majesty, ruler of Dream Castle.
King: And I’m King of Grundles, co-ruler of Dream Castle.
Magic Star: Meet our guests Teddy Ruxpin, Grubby and Gimmick.
Majesty: How do you do? (bows)
King: Greetings. (removes hat and bows)
Teddy: Pleased to meet you, Majesty and King.
After the tour, they return to Paradise Estate, only to notice the solar eclipse happening.
Spike: Look! A solar eclipse!
Everyone: (Ooh-ing and ahh-ing)
Galaxy: Everyone, there’s something you should know about the solar eclipse.
Grubby: Sure, sure, don’t look directly into it.
Galaxy: No. I mean the eclipse isn’t supposed to happen for another three months.
Gimmick: Galaxy’s right. This is very er uh-uh peculiar.
Meanwhile, in a sealed up cave in a base at Mt. Chaos, the seal begins to dissolve little by little. There is also a pair of eyes that peek out.
Voice: (Growling)
Song is from "The Return of Jafar". I don't own MLP or Teddy Ruxpin, they belong to their respected owners. Hope you all enjoy!
Critique and/or feedback would be really appreciated. Enjoy!
The Solar Eclipse Monsters
Part 1:
Today is a typical day for the Little Ponies as they romp and frolic in Dream Valley. Wind Whistler and Paradise fly through clouds and even bashing some. As Fizzy makes bubbles appear and Speedy pops them one by one. Scrumptious gets some vegetables from her garden as Posey picks a few flowers from hers.
Posey: Gee Scrumptious, your vegetables look great.
Scrumptious: So do your flowers, Posey. (sniffs flowers) They smell pretty too.
Scrumptious takes her basket of vegetables to Cupcake’s kitchen. While Paradise is flying, she notices a giant airship. She meets the crew. One is a brown bear wearing red & tan shirt & shorts, the other is a yellow caterpillar with eight limbs and the third is an old man wearing a green shirt and inventor’s apron.
Paradise: Who are you?
Bear: I was going to ask the same to you, also where are we?
Paradise: I’m Paradise and this is Dream Valley in Ponyland.
Old man: Ponyland? That doesn’t seem to be on our charter.
Caterpillar: We probably should’ve taken a right at Alba Query.
Bear: Well, I’m Teddy Ruxpin, an illiop. And this is Grubby, an octopede.
Grubby: Hello.
Teddy: And Newton Gimmick.
Gimmick: How do you do.
Teddy: We could use a place to rest anyway. Know where we can stay, Paradise?
Paradise: Sure do. Follow me.
The airship follows Paradise to Dream Valley. At that time, in a tower far from Ponyland, a green character wearing a purple robe is at his desk, looking over papers and such. His name being Jack W. Tweeg.
Tweeg: (Sighs) Ever since L.B., Buffy and the bounders left, it’s been rather dull around here. Also since those goody-two-shoes have left, there’s no one to bother.
He goes to his balcony, looking over it and remembering many of the times he’s tried villainy, only for it to turn out unpleasant.
Tweeg: I hate to admit it, but L.B.’s right; I am a failure as a villain. Also, do I really belong at M.A.V.O.? I mean, all that’s happened was I screwed up and got the slammer. No one at M.A.V.O. really cared for me, not even Mommy. Like L.B. said, I should quit.
Just then, Louie the messenger Grunge shows up with a telegram from M.A.V.O. He hands it to Tweeg whom opens it and reads it.
Tweeg: “To Jack W. Tweeg, we at M.A.V.O. have decided to give you a little something, to receive it, come to M.A.V.O. headquarters. Sign Quellor the Supreme Oppressor of Monsters And Villains Organization.” Hmm, I wonder what it could be.
He heads off to the headquarters of M.A.V.O. (Monsters and Villains Organization) where he comes before all the members and the head, Quellor. By him are his pet rat-bats, Ickly Bognostroclum, Drudge, Trudge and Sludge.
Quellor: So, Tweeg, you have come at last.
Tweeg: Yes. I got a telegram saying that you had something for me.
Bognostroclum: We’ve taken a vote and we’ve decided… you’re out of M.A.V.O.!
Tweeg (pretending to be upset when is really pleased): I… I am?
Quellor: Yes, you’ve done more screw-ups and less success and were lousy with dues.
Tweeg: I thought I paid my last due.
Mrs. Maggotheart: Yes, though you were tardy in showing up here.
Eleanor: You’ve been worthless since the day you were born!
Quellor: You Jack W. Tweeg have been nothing but a low-down idiotic nuisance to all of us ever since we let you in as an apprentice!
After being insulted, Tweeg becomes angry and bursts into song.
Tweeg:
That’s it!
I’ve had it
I hate to be dramatic
But it’s time for me
To hit the road
Quellor tries zapping him but Tweeg dodges just barely.
Terrific!
Fine!
I’m drawin’ the line
before I wind up as a great big toad!
Drudge, Sludge and Trudge take him by his arms and escort him out the door.
I was a fool to stop you from runnin’ the show
I’m cuttin’ ya loose, fellas!
Well, here I go!
He gets booted out the door, literally. He just waves back to them as they close the door at him.
Arrividerci!
C’est la vie!
Gets back up, rubbing his sore butt.
Hope all goes well!
I’m lookin’ out for me!
He returns to his tower as he packs his things and leaves a “For Sale” sign in front.
Tweeg speaking: Well, I’m off to start a new life. Maybe I’ll move back in with Pop.
He walks down a path into a small town.
Tweeg: But who knows what’ll happen? Only the future can tell.
He turns to some Illiper passing by.
Tweeg: Oh, you don’t think I can do it? I’ll show ya.
The passerby just rolls his eyes as Tweeg gets back into song.
Okay! I’m not bright,
I’ve paid my second-to-right,
And I don’t get no respect
I turn the other way
But this lousy day
Is the only thanks that I get
He comes upon a produce stand, leaning on the counter.
I never found a friend that I can trust
they promise caviar,
And leave me eatin’ dust!
He goes off again walking down the road.
That’s some reward for loyalty
From here on in,
I’m lookin’ out for me!
Oh, I don’t need nobody else
I’ll never fail
I’ll cover my own trail
He makes his way past a crowd of Illipers.
I can take care of myself!
He gets past them and comes upon some others, whom he puts his arms around; they all do a cancan of some sort.
You know, it just don’t pay
To give a hoot
I’m givin’ all my heart
What do I get?
the boot!
He breaks from the dancers and kicks the ground.
I’m through with that,
I’m runnin’ free
From here on in,
I’m lookin’ out for me!
(Song ends)
Someone hands him his suitcase that he put down somewhere, he takes it and continues on his way. At that time, Paradise introduces Teddy, Grubby and Gimmick to the rest of the Ponies and their friends.
Paradise: Everyone, meet Teddy, Grubby and Gimmick.
Wind Whistler: It’s a pleasure to make all of your acquaintances.
Gimmick: Likewise, I’m er, uh, sure.
Soon enough, everyone has tea, milk and gingerbread cookies.
Megan: So, what brings you to Ponyland?
Teddy: We’re looking for other Illiops like me in Grundo; also return some crystals to the Hard-to-Find City.
Paradise: I’ve heard of the Hard-to-Find City. It was taken over by the nasty Gutangs.
Grubby: Yup. We defeated them more than once. Though, we probably haven’t seen the last of Quellor.
Danny: Who’s this Quellor guy?
Teddy: He’s a powerful villain and the head of a group called Monsters and Villains Organization, or M.A.V.O.
Gimmick: But Grubby is right. Who knows what he’s up to now?
As Tweeg is walking down the path, he sits on a rock and takes a break. That’s when he’s approached by Quellor’s 3 goons.
Tweeg: Ugh, what is it this time?
Sludge: Quellor changed his mind about ya, he wants ya back in M.A.V.O.
Tweeg: Oh really?
Drudge: Yeah, if you complete a certain task, he’ll let you back in.
Tweeg: What sort of task?
Trudge: He’ll tell ya when we get back to H.Q.
Though, reluctant and skeptic, Tweeg follows them. They come to M.A.V.O. where Quellor is in front of a large cauldron.
Tweeg: So, what is it I need to do?
Quellor: Before I tell you that, first, let me tell you about the Solar Eclipse Monsters. You see, every solar eclipse, three giant creatures come from the base of Mt. Chaos and wreak havoc.
Tweeg: But the next solar eclipse won’t happen for another 3 months.
Quellor: I know, that’s where you come in. See, I came upon a spell that’ll make the eclipse last forever and the monsters will be under our control. If you conjure up the potion, you’re back in M.A.V.O.
Tweeg: Well, O.K.
He reluctantly and naively starts mixing the potion to create the eternal eclipse. Soon enough after he stirs the potion, it erupts and a dark purple cloud comes out.
Quellor: Yes. Yes!
Tweeg: So… I’m back in? (grins)
Quellor: Oh, you’re back in all right.
Trudge and Sludge throw him in a dungeon cell.
Tweeg: Oof!
And slam the door, locking it.
Quellor: Back in the dungeon that is. (laughs)
Tweeg: Hey! You tricked me, Quellor!
Trudge: Yeah, and to make sure you don’t foil M.A.V.O. again… (makes slashing sound)
Tweeg: (Gasps)
Quellor: But I’ll take care of that later. Right now, I have an eternal eclipse to prepare for.
He and his goons leave as Tweeg just sits there with his arms resting on his knees and buries his face in his arms.
Tweeg: (Sobbing)
Now Tweeg was in a great predicament, he helped let loose terrible monsters and he is to be killed. At that time, in Dream Valley, the Ponies and their friends are giving their guests a tour. They come upon Dream Castle where Majesty the unicorn and the Grundle King meet them.
Magic Star: And this is Dream Castle, where we used to live until we got Paradise Estate. Then we gave Dream Castle to the Grundles.
Majesty: I’m Majesty, ruler of Dream Castle.
King: And I’m King of Grundles, co-ruler of Dream Castle.
Magic Star: Meet our guests Teddy Ruxpin, Grubby and Gimmick.
Majesty: How do you do? (bows)
King: Greetings. (removes hat and bows)
Teddy: Pleased to meet you, Majesty and King.
After the tour, they return to Paradise Estate, only to notice the solar eclipse happening.
Spike: Look! A solar eclipse!
Everyone: (Ooh-ing and ahh-ing)
Galaxy: Everyone, there’s something you should know about the solar eclipse.
Grubby: Sure, sure, don’t look directly into it.
Galaxy: No. I mean the eclipse isn’t supposed to happen for another three months.
Gimmick: Galaxy’s right. This is very er uh-uh peculiar.
Meanwhile, in a sealed up cave in a base at Mt. Chaos, the seal begins to dissolve little by little. There is also a pair of eyes that peek out.
Voice: (Growling)
To be continued…
Song is from "The Return of Jafar". I don't own MLP or Teddy Ruxpin, they belong to their respected owners. Hope you all enjoy!